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We'll meet from nine to ten by ~ilovebishonen:iconilovebishonen:





We'll meet from nine to ten

Because my soul explodes
but you don't have the time,
I sit here in the darkness
writting poetic crap.

I lost my sense of self,
and can't see, now i'm blind.
I smell the floor beneath me,
I miss Japan so much.

And even tho i try
to think further ahead,
my heart, my soul, my hands
press rewind in my head.

I think of all the memories
together we have made,
and were perhaps those memories
that left us were we stand?

I sit and think about
your thoughts, your dreams, your fears
I know them all too well,
I've read them in my dreams.

My fear, I'll tell you now,
is that indeed I've dreamed,
and I don't really am
and never met your skin.

Because if Tyké cheated
and wasn't really there,
I wonder what dark mystery
she'll throw now in my way.
:iconilovebishonen:

Author's Comments

First time I post poetry here (lets see how the DA's html handles it) .

Wrote this when my baby told me he had time for me from 9 to 10 (am here, pm there) ; something which he then repented... but during those 7 hrs in the middle I wrote this poem and drew this: [link]

Can you tell I'm Cancer ?

Anyways, my poetry in english may be full of mistakes of all sorts, grammar, arrangements of words and rhyme . To be honest I applied the resources I know from spanish poetry (guessing they're the same) but I don't know whether they'll suit the english "taste". I dislike the poor rhyme in it but if I'm not mistaken rhyme is not as necesary in english as it is in spanish (specially at the end of the line)

Wish I could write english poems with the rhyming my spanish ones have, but oh well...

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